sleeplover567
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  • 14-03-2019
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If someone could read the first part of my essay and give feedback that would be great

If someone could read the first part of my essay and give feedback that would be great class=

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hilaryluevano2005
hilaryluevano2005 hilaryluevano2005
  • 14-03-2019

Pretty good! I don’t see any mistakes

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jade13108
jade13108 jade13108
  • 14-03-2019
I would try not to use the word culture so much. Try to use the words civilization, society, and lifestyle. I hope this help!
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